শুক্রবার, ১২ সেপ্টেম্বর, ২০১৪

In 2013 In los Angeles the bank door went boom like a tank shooting out a missile then Deacon Pouri and Leshidus came walking in. They had heaps of frost on them. Then five policemen came walking in. Less than a second they all fell. Then we got the money then one of the policemen grabbed leshidus and point a pistol to his head. Pouri pulled out a AK47 and shoot the policeman suddenly we saw a policeman car we chucked the money in and drive away.

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  1. deacon its hard for me to comment because your writing is still in arabic? maybe ask your teacher or even miss newton if they can have a look at it again :(. WOW what a story!

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  2. Nice work Deacon. I like the way you used the name for the gun. Maybe next time you can add a bit of colour on your writing. Why did you guys throw the money away?

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  3. Great work Deacon i like the way you used describing words in your story like AK47 i think that part was the best but i think you should check it

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